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\section{Critical Analysis}  This paper proves that the formation of $\alpha$ phase is definitely dependent upon the $\omega$ phase but is inconclusive as to which mechanism dominates the formation of $\alpha$ particles. There is insufficient evidence of one being superior to the other. The paper uses various modern technologies and tests both hypotheses mentioned in the introduction instead of just investigating one. The problem with this paper is that the Ti-5553 alloy that is being used as a test sample has many alloying elements and therefore makes it difficult to determine where the $\alpha$ particles are forming at the defects at grain boundaries around the alloying elements and titanium or if theytruly  are affected by nucleating due to  the presence of $\omega$.