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\textbf{I don't believe the axis labels.} If you were really plotting y in amps versus x in amps, wouldn't the slope be dimensionless, rather than in Coulombs? Also, what precisely is $I_{final}$ anyway, and what does it have to do with $V_{sq}$?
\section{BEGIN EDITORIAL COMMENT: THIS PAPER IS TIRESOMELY SLOPPY! Current in Amps versus current in Amps equals the charge on the electron???????? You can and should do much better on a first draft, and your editor deserves better proofreading than this. A real editor would send it back unedited. A FIRST draft doesn't mean you don't re-read, proofread, and revise before submitting, it means you have done this before you send it to an editor for their FIRST reading. It has taken me multiple days ---days longer than it should have -- to fully comment on this one paper (yes, more than 24 hours of just writing comments) , and I haven't been able to comment on everything that needs improvement or correction. I realize that
because of the delay in submission, the poor quality of the draft that was submitted, and the time thus required for comments, you now have very little time to make all the corrections that are necessary, but I expect them to be done. The
delay grade for this paper as is
due to the delay in submission would be a 60, and
it could easily have been 95 based on the
poor quality of the
draft that was submitted.} data. }