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\textit{Who would have thought you could discover fundamental physics from simple ``noise?'' That's pretty neat! }  \textit{\end{quote}}  Notice \textbf{Notice  how this version succinctly describes tries to provide a description of }  \begin{enumerate}  \item what Johnson noise and Shot noise are  \item what we need to measure (and as a function of what variables)  \item and what we aim to determine from the measurement (for example, values for fundamental constants of physics $k_B$ and $e$)  \end{enumerate}.  \textbf{Do you think your classmates in PHY350 would understand these three points from your paper, \textit{your paper},  as written?} If not, you need to rewrite your paper in a way that they can. \textbf{Do you understand these 3 points yourself?} If not, your responsibility is to review the physics --- I recommend reviewing the introductions to sections 1 and 3 of your teachspin manual! --- and make sure you do! Then, rewrite the paper to make it clear you understand what you were doing (and why).