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\textbf{Sorry, throwing all the graphs and tables in a results section with little or no explanation simply doesn't work as a journal article. There needs to a clear explanation of what these results are and what they mean. A results section can't just consist of graphs and tables. tables}.  It \textbf{It  might help to think of a good results and analysis section as being like a letter to a friend or an instructional video. The graphs and tables are part of the explanation, not the explanation itself. } itself}.