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%systems.   % we described a template for a pattern  % language for interactions in a computational poetry workshop, closely  The thought experiment we apply here explores serendipity in such scenarios, and is influenced by the ideas of \citeA{gabriel2002writer} on Writers Workshops. Following \citeA{gabriel2002writer}, we define a \emph{Workshop} to be an activity identify key activities  for two or more agents consisting of the following steps: discussing creative work:  {\tt presentation}, {\tt listening}, {\tt feedback}, {\tt questions}, and {\tt reflections}. In general, the first and most important  feature of {\tt feedback} is for the listener to say what they heard;  in other words, what they find in the presented work. In some