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Various social strategies, ranging from Writers Workshops to open  source software, pair programming, and design charettes  \cite[p. 11]{gabriel2002writer} have been developed to exploit similar  emergent effects and to develop \emph{new} shared language. In  \cite{poetry-workshop}, we investigate We have  recently investigated  the feasibility of using designs of this sort in multi-agent systems that learn by sharing and  discussing partial understandings. This earlier paper remains broadly  indicative, however, and the ideas it describes can see considerable  benefit from the more formal thinking we develop in the current work. understandings \cite{corneli2015computational,corneli2015feedback}.  \citeA{robot-rendezvous} develop a discussion of serendipitous  rendezvous in a multi-agent system for a graph exploration problem, in  diff --git a/9ww-intro.tex b/9ww-intro.tex  index 7a85cde..ffc6df8 100644  --- a/9ww-intro.tex  +++ b/9ww-intro.tex 
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creativity and feedback can create scenarios where serendipity could  occur within a computer system as well.  In \cite{poetry-workshop}, \cite{corneli2015computational},  we described the preliminary designs for multi-agent systems that learn by sharing work in progress and  discussing partial understandings.   %