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above formal enough? Could these bulleted ideas be condensed into  one or two paragraphs]}  \textbf{[AJ I'd say Yes to including the repetition. Always good to include 'linking’ text between sections, makes the narrative easier to read. Regarding condensing bulleted ideas into paragraphs, would prefer to keep the bullets as it's a cleaner layout compared to dense text.]}  \subsubsection*{Key condition for serendipity}  \begin{itemize}