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\end{enumerate}  \end{quote}  Data analysis and numerical computation are now ubiquitous in astronomy (and and  in STEM careers); careers; yet  undergraduate curricula have been slower to train students in a systematic fashion in these skills. At Michigan State University, This deficiency is noticed when the  astronomy students are required to complete a begin their  senior thesis. thesis, which is a requirement for an astronomy degree at Michigan State.  As noted in the accreditation report, \begin{quote}  During the past decade, we have found that many of our students  begin their senior thesis project without the statistical,