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\item I could improve the work by putting error bars on the predictions -- perhaps this will boost faith in the results, or point to some hitherto unaccounted-for issue.  \end{itemize}  \item {\it Is there anything to learn from the inevitable energy dissipation as the DNA moves through the viscous fluid? } }Could predict this from hydrodynamic considerations.  How much work is done by the electric field? Biological implications?  \item Where does the {\it nonequilibrium} stuff happen? There is no mention of linear response or anything like that.  \end{enumerate}