This ISN'T a full FIRST draft. I'm not going to be able to provide a full set of comments, so it is likely there are sections of your paper that won't benefit from the process of editorial review and rewriting. See syllabus for rules regarding first drafts and the effect on your grade.
If you are a coauthor you can get started by adding some content to it. Click the Insert or Insert Figure button below or drag and drop an image onto this text.