Why Hermione was better than Harry in almost every respect”] [by Ronald Frump and colleagues] to the [Journal of Squirrel-Puppy Relationships].
The authors present [insert general overview of research and key findings]. This research is [well-suited/not-suitable] for the remit of the journal.
[Insert any comments regarding potential conflicts of interest, or about areas of relevant expertise that you feel you are lacking].
I recommend [accept/minor revisions/major revisions/oblivion], pending x, y, and z.
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Congratulations to the authors on a great piece of work, and I look forward to seeing their research [published/rejected/re-written with all of the references to my own tangentially-relevant work included.]
Sincerely,
[Ralph Lauren]
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